Feedback and Suggestions: Gym, Hotel, and Food Services
Student’s Feedback on German Course
Q1. Hi J. Nice to meet you. I have decided to learn German because I need to get a certificate to get into university. However, I don’t really like learning this language. I would prefer to study English.
Q2: I believe that the course is good because the teacher teaches very well and there are only three people in the class. But, on the other hand, I think it’s a disadvantage that the teacher isn’t a native speaker.
Q3: I would feel happy because the teacher, who isn’t native, can explain the things I don’t understand in Spanish. However, I would also like to have a native teacher, too. It would be a perfect combination, and I would feel very happy.
Gym Training Cancellation – Informal
Hi John, What do you think about the cancellation of training at the gym? I can’t believe the personal trainer is going away on holiday, and we don’t have training. The gym should offer a discount if they plan to go on holiday. What do you think about this proposal? I just signed up and haven’t trained yet! Bye, Luis.
Gym Training Cancellation – Formal
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in relation to the previous email (regarding the new message on our website), and I would like to express my disagreement about the cancellation of the training service.
I feel it is unacceptable to be without training for two weeks. In my case, I am going to this gym for this service, and now I cannot train with anybody.
I would like to suggest two alternatives:
- Firstly, I believe that while my personal trainer should be allowed to take a vacation, as I pay for this service, I should be provided with another personal trainer.
- Secondly, you should give me a discount for these two weeks without a personal trainer.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. If my recommendation isn’t acceptable, I will look at other personal trainer offers. Thank you for your attention.
Yours faithfully,
LAMG
Hotel Booking Feedback
Q1: Hi J. Nice to meet you. I have joined here because I am looking for a hotel in NY, but I can’t find any hotel within my budget.
Q2: The service is very good, but the prices are very expensive. I would like to travel to NYC, but I don’t find many options on this website.
Q3: I am a new member of Hotel, and I didn’t know about the latest prices. I think that if the prices don’t decrease, people won’t buy on this platform.
Feedback on MEALS Platform – Informal
Dear Rick, Sorry I haven’t written to you for so long, but I have bad news about the platform, MEALS. We must pay 10% more next month because they said they need to reduce the high cost involved in delivering the meals. What do you think about the fee increase? I’ve checked other websites on the internet, and I have found FOODSL, and this platform has better prices than MEALS. Well, I have to go now. Bye, Luis.
Feedback on MEALS Platform – Formal
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in relation to the previous email, and I want to express my disagreement about the 10% increase in the fee for meal orders.
I feel it is unacceptable, and I would like to suggest two alternatives:
- Firstly, I personally believe that if you have to increase the fee, you should give me a discount for the next order.
- Secondly, if you cannot give a discount, I would like express delivery, for example, within one hour.
I look forward to hearing back from you. If my recommendation isn’t acceptable, I will look at other website platforms. Thank you for your attention.
Yours faithfully,
LAMG
Gym Training Cancellation – Informal (Duplicate)
This section is a duplicate of the earlier informal feedback on gym training. It’s best to consolidate feedback to avoid repetition.
Hi John, What do you think about the cancellation of training at the gym? I can’t believe the personal trainer is going away on holiday, and we don’t have training. The gym should offer a discount if they plan to go on holiday. What do you think about this proposal? I just signed up and haven’t trained yet! Bye, Luis.
Gym Training Cancellation – Formal (Duplicate)
This section is a duplicate of the earlier formal feedback.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in relation with the previous e-mail (to the new message in our website) and I would like to show you my disagreement about the cancellation of the service of training.
I feel it is unacceptable to be for two weeks without training. In my case, I am going to this gym for this service and now I cannot train with anybody.
I would like to suggest two alternatives: First of all, I believe that my personal trainer should be on vacation but as I pay for this service, I must have another personal trainer. As a second alternative, you shold give me a discount for these two weeks without personal trainer.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. If my recommendation isn’t acceptable, I will look at other personal trainer offers.Thanks you for your attention.Yours faithfully,LAMG
Feedback on MEALS Platform – Informal (Duplicate)
This is a duplicate of the informal feedback on MEALS.
Dear Rick, sorry I haven´t written you for so long but I have bud news for the platform MELS. We must pay 10% more in the next month because they said that they need to reduce the high cost involved delivering th meals. What do you think about the fee increase? I´ve checked on internet other websites and I have found FOODSL and this platform have better prices than MEALS. Well I have to go now. Bye. Luis.
Feedback on MEALS Platform – Formal (Duplicate)
This is a duplicate of the formal feedback on MEALS.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in relation with the previous email and I want to show you disagreement about the increase of 10% of a fee for the meals order.
I feel it is unacceptable and I would like to suggest two alternatives:First of all, I personally believe that if you have to increase the fee, you should give me a discount for the next order.Secondly, If you cannot give a discount, I would like a express delivery, for example, in one hour.
I look forward to hearing back from you If my recommendation isn’t acceptable, I will look at other websites platforms. Thanks you for your attention.Yours faithfully,LAMG